you were the hurricane
that devasted me
causing havoc
leaving behind
a gaping void
the exact shape of you
that devasted me
causing havoc
leaving behind
a gaping void
the exact shape of you
Credit: worthy_wordsmith
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let me try my rendition:
you were the sun
that shined upon me
causing spectrum
bringing forth a band of colors
that fills my heart
with rays of you
.crossdandy
There are always two sides of things;
That's how they came out with the term two sides of coins;
Acknowledgment | Denial
Acceptance | Rejection
Communication | Concealment
Changes | Stillness
Deserving | Unfairness
Happiness | Sadness
Strong | Weak
Trust | Doubt
Your edition versus my version;
We hold no truth in our heads unless we experience it ourselves;
Just like how I came across this poet, but in my head, I'm crafting the opposite version.
Speak, find courage;
Otherwise, you will drown in your own thoughts.
Never again, I promise myself.